I hit him
with a whip.
He said:
OUCH
A slight edit..done with respect.
I hit him harder
with a whip
He cry's out loud
Pain and Pleasure
I hit him
with a whip.
He said:
OUCH
A slight edit..done with respect.
I hit him harder
with a whip
He cry's out loud
Pain and Pleasure
2 comments:
I love this! Short, sweat and to the point. That's why it's a Haiku.huh? :)
It should be 17 syllables in Japanese, but Western Haiku seems to accept 16 hence the specific length.
And thanks for the comment..
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